Wednesday, September 14, 2016

writing

this is my writing from cohen hollowway

Hooked On Danger

Pua cast his line from his dinghy and it snagged straight away. Uncle tried to help him reel it in but it wouldn’t budge. Suddenly the skies turned grey, the sea  got choppy and a giant pirate ship bubbled up from the depths of the ocean dwarfing uncles dinghy.
The Massive Mossy wrecked merchant lay on the stormy sea’s abandoned. “Shall we board uncle” BOOM a small cannonball soared past our dinghy uncle let’s go the dinghy roared into gear another cannonball launched suddenly our boat stopped and we were going the other way towards the ship “Help” we screamed but it was no use seconds later a small ovalular porthole opened and me and uncle we were dragged onto the huge vessel. I was scared to death but no one came or seemed to be on the ship. Uncle suggested we go up to the decks but I fainted in fright I woke up to find myself in a cabin in a bed the room had a bookshelf a desk loads of maps and crystal seated in the centre of the desk after exploring the cabin I wandered out on the decks to see uncle driving and the village was in sight

Writing

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